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    4月13日

    Talking about When I was a Boy

     

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    When I was a Boy

    When i was a boy

    I fished the canal

    with a stick some cotton

    and a worm

     

     

    I’d sit on the canal bank

    In the warmth of the sun

    And I’d watch

     has that worm did squirm

     

    Back then the canal

    Was filled with life

    So full of wild creatures

    It could be cut with a knife

     

    Frogs, toads, sticklebacks

    To name just a few

    While over head

    May fly’s and dragon fly’s flew

     

    The water was clear

    You could see to the mud

    That bubbled with life

    Like a giant soapsud

     

    But now that I’m grown

    The canal’s just a pit

    Filled with old shopping trolleys

    And all kinds of s**t.

     

    The life is all gone

    You can’t even find a snail

    If you do find a frog

    It is very sick and pale

     

    Now when I walk the canal

    I get a tear in my eye.

    And the little boy inside me

    he starts to cry

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    没有名字发表:
    Loved the end, even tho it's sad...
    11 月 9 日
    Jarmara发表:

    Hi I'm A Writer because that is what I do... I found your space very interesting

    If you would like to meet a like minded scribbler... Who has set up a writing group called 'The Write word at the Write time'  (be aware it is a very new group.... and I'm new to all of this too)

    then please pop in when you have some free time and follow the link from my space

    Yours

    Anon

    6 月 17 日
    没有名字发表:
    hey </3
    you wrote that?
    hueva did tiz awesum
    check my space out, i do poetry aswell ^_^
    not as good as tht though ^_^
    naf x
    4 月 13 日

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